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Hi!

Hope you are doing well.

At around 8,500 words, the piece is significantly too long for a typical Substack post. I strongly recommend breaking it into a series of shorter articles, each focused on a distinct theme (e.g. categorisation, memory, language acquisition). Readers are more likely to stay engaged with posts under 2,000 words. I quickly disconnected and it will take quite a while to read and make sense of your thesis.

The central idea—that intelligence operates via comparison and that this underpins language—is intriguing, but the argument lacks clear logical scaffolding. Key claims (e.g. “differences are faster than similarities”) are asserted rather than demonstrated, and the transitions between topics can feel abrupt.

As a linguist, I find you assertion on Grice very misguided because you do not define the scope.

It's about contributing to a conversation in a way that is oriented toward mutual understanding, assuming a shared goal of communicative success. The four maxims—Quantity, Quality, Relevance, and Manner—are guidelines that rational interlocutors are presumed to follow unless there's good reason not to.

Example: Saying “Some of the guests arrived” when you know all did violates Quantity, but might implicate that not all were welcome.

Grice himself acknowledged that violations or floutings of these maxims are not only common but essential to communication, as they generate implicatures. So the principle was never absolute.

It is really good to see that you cite several important thinkers (e.g. Gärdenfors, Goldstone, Tomasello), but references are occasionally vague or used without critical engagement. The piece would benefit from tighter integration of sources into the argument and a consistent referencing style.

I think this has has real potential if reframed as a structured series. I wish better skilled people than me wold engage with your piece as well. I would suggest you redraft starting with s short introductory post outlining the overarching thesis and then with follow-up posts on:

- categorisation;

- memory;

- object recognition;

- language acquisition;

- reference and meaning.

You more concret examples if possible, it helps with bastract claims.

Sorr this is very short and doe not address the sentral thesis. As I said above, a very long piece to read!

I will try and focus on the thesis at a later stage.

Best regards

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